Paired Haiku
Natural forces
bring the ill winds of Time’s test:
to heal, earth, and rest.
~~~
Unrest brings ill health,
human nature resists rest:
nature resists man.
©2015, stu06bloc9
written for the weekly Haiku challenge#38 at https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2015/03/30/ronovanwrites-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-38-ill-rest/ (I wrote several trying to tackle a response to this prompt but these were the most Haiku-like Haiku…
I like the contrast, ill/health…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you 🙂
LikeLike
These are beautiful. I like the idea of pairing, too. Or two. 😉
LikeLike
Thank you 🙂 I’m always very unsure about my haiku, quite a new way of attempting poetry for me.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Me too! I identify with that completely. 🙂
LikeLike